The main edit to this chapter came very early in the process. Very few people have seen this section—I don’t think it made it past the first revision. I’ll probably post in on the ‘deleted scenes’ section, though. What good is a website if you can’t embarrass yourself?
Anyway, the scene dealt with Daorn and Kaise approaching Kiin (during the fencing practice) and asking him if they could go with Sarene into Elantris. He responded by saying that they could as long as they did some silly homework-style projects for him. (Essays or multiplication tables or something like that.) In a re-read, I realized that this was WAY to modern, even for Kiin. I’d think that people who did this today were being progressive—and a bit odd. (What are these kids? Home-schoolers?)
Anyway, I cut the scene.
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