Ahan’s line here is one of my favorite openers in the book. Partially because it is amusing, and partially because it so perfectly represents what is going on in the story. Good political maneuvering, in my opinion, leads to shifts in power. Two or more sides vie, the upper-hand bouncing back and forth between them.
If you read over this scene in the garden, you might notice something odd. I didn’t see it until I was doing the copy edit, and by then it was too late to change. Lukel and Kiin aren’t there for the meeting. They’re never mentioned, and I never explain why they aren’t there. I think that I just forgot to put them in, since the scene isn’t set in the customary location of Kiin’s kitchen.
I don’t know if readers notice it or not—or even if they care—but I get tired of writing scenes in the same locations. I know it’s common in storytelling to do this. Most sitcoms, for instance, always take place in the same locations over and over again. However, I enjoy describing new settings, even if the change is as simple as putting the meeting outside instead of in the kitchen. Maybe it’s an unnecessary complication, but it makes the writing more interesting for me.
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