Now, perhaps, you see why I was worried that I had Raoden too far up on the slope. In order for the plot to work, I had to get him down to the city in a hurry so that he could draw the Chasm Line.
If you think about pacing a little bit as you read this chapter, you’ll see that a lot more time is passing between sections than I’m implying by the quick cuts. It probably takes Raoden a good twenty minutes of running to get down that mountain. Fortunately, I’ve established that Elantrians don’t get out-of-breath.
He also runs, dragging the stick, longer than I imply. I think the pacing here is important to keep up the tension. However, if you draw the line, you’ll see that he had to cross a good distance of land while dragging his stick.
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