In a later draft, I added a bit of padding to this chapter—in particular, I included more explanations by Raoden regarding how he’d been trying to meet with Sarene. I was worried that I was pushing the bounds of plausibility too much with Raoden’s false persona. One of the main reasons that he left Elantris was to see Sarene again, and it just didn’t make sense that he would try to keep fooling her. Moshe noted this as well.
So, we have Sarene refusing Kaloo’s letters, and not wanting to let him get her alone. Perhaps this is a little implausible as well—I can’t see Sarene avoiding anything that smells of politics. Fortunately, Sarene is also far more impetuous than other ‘political’ character’s I’ve used. I can see her sending away Kaloo’s letter because of a mood, or simply because she thought he was trying to taunt her.
Either way, I had to find a reason to maintain the chrade through this chapter, otherwise I wouldn’t have been able to pull off Raoden’s dramatic appearance in the next chapter.
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