I think this final scene with Sarene in bed is much more powerful since I didn’t show the actual conversation with Eventeo. Having it begin with a depressed Sarene, the Seon link disappearing, leaves an air of melancholy on the scene that is more telling than the sense of sorrowful confrontation that would have come from having Eventeo explain himself to Sarene.
Obviously, poor Eventeo isn’t in a very easy position. I didn’t want him to have an easy answer; I think this is a very difficult decision for him to make, and I don’t really think there is an obviously right answer—even though Sarene thinks that there is. We’ll see later that Sarene doesn’t look at things the same way a person who actually has to be a leader does.
I wish I could have made Eventeo a viewpoint character—he goes through a lot of conflict and trouble in the book. Unfortunately, there’s never enough room to do all the things that you want to, and I like how tight the book feels with only having the rotating viewpoints.
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