In the Mad Prince drafts of the book, I was still holding off on revealing him to the readers. His army was out there in this chapter—visible because of its fires in the night. I revealed that Hrathen considered the newcomer an ally, but I hadn’t yet given away who the newcomer was.
The Mad Prince’s disappearance was probably the most time-consuming cut I made, not to mention the one most difficult for me personally. I’m happy to know he lives on in his web presence—he’s practically be the star of the ‘Deleted Scenes’ section. The cut came at the suggestion of Joshua “Axe Man” Bilmes. The stark truth is, the story didn’t need another random diversion here. We’re getting very close to the climax, and introducing another whole character—with his own plot, problems, and tangents—just wasn’t good for the pacing. Eton was, in my opinion, a brilliant character. However, he just didn’t belong in the book.
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