Chapter Breaks and Pacing
I thought I’d do a post on pacing, chapter length, and pulling readers through a story. This is something I’ve been thinking about. Specifically, I’ve noticed at many authors in fantasy seem to be adopting a more thriller-style (genre, not the music video) of pacing. Shorter chapters, with cliffhanger endings that make for a quick turn to the next page.
Perhaps it’s always been this way, and I’m just more sensitive to writing methodology now, as I’m a writer myself. But it does seem to be happening more. A good example are the Codex Alera books by Jim Butcher. But I’ve noticed some of it in your own books, Brent. It makes me wonder if this is a reaction, on our part as a genre, but the huge teen-fantasy bubble that happened surrounding Harry Potter. YA and middle grade also tend to be more quickly paced, more tight in this regard.
Oddly, I’ve found myself reacting against it. Not that I don’t like this style of storytelling—in fact, I think it works very well. Jim’s novel that I mentioned above was a real pleasure to read. Terry Pratchett does this in his books, and they’re excellent. But I don’t know if it matches every project and every story.
Conventional wisdom in writing is that you don’t want the reader to stop and take a break, otherwise they might not return to the book. You always want to leave them hanging. And yet, I don’t know if this kind of pacing works very well in the very long form novels. When I write my books these days, I WANT to give the reader some breathing room. Some time to step away from the book, if they want, and digest what has happened. I feel that if I pace them absolutely break-neck, the experience will be exhausting and draining across the long haul, and the book will end up unfulfilling.
Is this something you’ve ever thought about? Do you merely let pacing and chapter breaks happen? Readers, do you notice this? What do you think of it?
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