A couple of weeks ago on Writing Excuses, Dan, Howard, and I did some example line editing on the beginning of the first novel I wrote . It went over very well, so in this week’s episode we return to White Sand and line edit the dialogue . You want to listen to it, right?
In the most recent Warbreaker annotations I talk about chapter four. First I discuss the name system used in the book , and then I cover Hawaii and the undead .
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