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Interview #45: Twitter: TOM Writing and Editing Process, Entry #58

Brandon Sanderson (28 July 2010)

Chapter 66 increased in size by 2.5%. (Really, more like it increased by 10%, then I cut the chapter down.)

BRANDON SANDERSON

Whew. 67 edited. That took a lot of work. A lot added, a lot cut. End result: Cut by 7.8%. 3 chapters and epilogue left. (About 100 pgs.)

BRANDON SANDERSON

Heh. Line from Towers of Midnight said: “And Rand did such and such.” Brain keeps reading “Ayn Rand.” Did Goodkind sneak over and rewrite my manuscript?

BRANDON SANDERSON

5% cut from the last of the three ‘Needs special attention” chapters I just revised, added to, and edited. Gets easier from here out.

BRANDON SANDERSON

These are manuscript pages, so in print, that would be more like 50 pages.

BRANDON SANDERSON

Typed in new wordcount for chapter. Excel spreadsheet responds: Chapter size increased by 748%. Uh, think I left a number off somewhere…

BRANDON SANDERSON

After a typo fix in the spreadsheet: Chapter 69 cut by 15.2%. 50 [manuscript] pages left to revise.

BRANDON SANDERSON

Before I left, I almost got chapter 70 done. Finished now, 4% cut. I’ve been over it often in other drafts, and didn’t need as much a trim.

BRANDON SANDERSON

Onward to the epilogue; it’s 6k words long.

BRANDON SANDERSON

12% cut from first scene of the epilogue. Five to go.

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6.8% cut from the next scene. Four to go.

BRANDON

Well, look at this. One last person in the epilogue I forgot to name. Glenn Bergevin. You’re in. 7% cut from the scene you are in.

BRANDON SANDERSON

13.9%. Two short scenes left.

BRANDON SANDERSON

12.2%. One more to go.

BRANDON SANDERSON

And…13.4% from the last scene. Book length is 320,286 words. 42,614 words cut. 11.7%. About 5k more than Knife of Dreams ; 4th longest in the series.

BRANDON SANDERSON

Hold off on celebrating TOO much, though. Needs a spellcheck, and a spot fix some problems Team Jordan has mentioned about earlier chapters.

BRANDON SANDERSON

Then it gets sent to a secret cabal of beta readers (no, you can’t join them. Sorry.) I spot fix problems they find, then a last quick draft.

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