In the final confrontation, the reality healing crystally stuff—was that something demanded by the notes, or just a spectacular way for that girl to deal with that guy?
Without delving too much into specifics, because I’m not sure exactly what’s going to end up in the encyclopedia and what’s going to end up in the notes, and things like this. Without going too much into specifics, for the Last Battle itself a lot of what Robert Jordan left me are concepts: concepts on this is how I want this to feel, the big crux of the Last Battle comes down to this question, this is where someone’s crowning moment is—these sorts of emotions. It was like he was laying down the emotional beats, and the actual how to put it together—a lot of that was left in my hands. He did have some brainstorms on that, but some of those brainstorms were from years ago, before he wrote… For instance, I’ve mentioned before that there is a brainstorm we have on “here’s how Rand is going to do it”—here’s a brainstorm that Robert Jordan had left. But he’d written this brainstorm around book 7 or 6 or something, and it involved the Choedan Kal—both of them. And we’re like, well he obviously threw that out the window and decided not to go with that. But some of these brainstorms that he’d had, we can say, oh this is the emotional resonance he’s going for. Looking at the idea between we want to have the different powers work together, to work in this way from his brainstorm, even though we can’t do it in the way that he was thinking of doing it ten years ago, we can still see the sort of thing that he was going for.
And the scene that Terez mentioned at the end mentions Rand’s big revelation that needed to happen so that the last moments could occur—he’s reflecting on that when he comes out. And so we knew this emotional resonance that Robert Jordan wanted. And we had all these sort of other things where he talks about just the feel he wants and things like this. And so a lot of the specifics—how to put these things together—were things that I pitched to Team Jordan to fit the framework of the notes, and then we tried out and saw if they worked. Which is kinda how you do writing, at least if you’re an outliner like me. I pitch ideas at myself, I build an outline out of it, and I try it out and see if it works. And what ended up in the book are the things that did work. What didn’t end up in the book are the things that didn’t work. For instance, “River of Souls”, which was in the ( Unfettered ) anthology, is one of the things I mentioned—that’s the sort of thing that we tried that doesn’t work. And the reason a lot of times that these things are being cut is because we are striving for that balance between “let’s push the story in new and innovative ways” between “let’s make sure we’re not straying too far from Robert Jordan’s vision”. And something like “River of Souls” strayed too far, and also kind of was distracting from the main point of the book—there were two big reasons to cut that sequence. But you see us doing things like that, and so the ones we end up with… A lot of these things about the actual Last Battle are me looking to put together what I feel creates the emotional resonance and the plot structure that Robert Jordan wanted for this ending.
I’ve said before that the main bulk of the writing we had for this last book involved three main areas: the Epilogue, the scene at the Field of Merrilor where Moiraine shows up and things like this, and the scene at the beginning in the Town, the village in the Waste—what does he call it? Does he call it the Town? The Town is what he calls it. Yeah. And those are three places where we have kind of unchanged Robert Jordan writing. Granted, all through the books, each of the books, you’ll find sprinklings where I’m able to use a paragraph or two, or a page, or something from his notes that spawns a chapter, but that’s where we have untouched Robert Jordan writing in this last book—I think those are the three main places.
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